大拇指知识
说几口很漂亮的英文
特别是几口很漂亮的托福书面语
Chinglish具体来说要戒除
那些在他们在托福考点上讲出的法式抒发
或许不全然负面影响主考官的认知
但妨碍了
他们有效地提升书面语水准
和托福书面语平均分
最重要的是那些抒发生活习惯常常教养已久，极难发生改变。有时他们挖空心思讲出的英文，第二语言者可能将用很单纯的词语就能精确easier的抒发，因此词无此难，无此大，要用的精确，才四两拨千斤。
快来深入细致纠偏托福书面语中20个低频法式抒发，是这时候跟它离婚啦。
1. It let me… 常被用以抒发 “…使/让我能…”
法式：Travelling let me have new experiences.
注：let 在这里并不精确，虽然let有许可/让的含义，但仅用于号召某人做他已经有计划去做的事情。比如：他终于让他们走了（我早就想走了）He finally let me go.
在他们解释一件事情对另一个事情的推动作用，用It allows/enables/helps me to …更加精确。如:
Traveling abroad allows meto have new experiences.
Reading magazines allows people to have new insights.
2. It makes me relax 使我放松
法式：It makes me improve my English. 使我提升英文
注：It makes me+形容词，使我…但使役动词make后加动词时要小心，有时有强迫某人做某事的含义。 因此正确的几种说法是：
It makes me feel relaxed. （makes me feel relaxed 比起makes me relaxed 更easier）
It allows me to relax / unwind.
It helps / enables me to improve my English.
3. I usually watch movies to relax myself.
注：Relax myself 会产生歧义，抒发放松他们能说：
I usually watch movies to relax.
I usually watch movies to unwind / let off steam/ destress.
Watching movies is a good way to put myself at ease.
4. On the one hand… on the other hand…
一方面…另一方面…
那个抒发，看似没有问题，递进关系，但实际上前后的观点应该是相反的，而不是递进的。因此抒发递进观点，他们能用Also，In addition，Furthermore 这样的抒发。
错误例句：
On the one hand, I worked very hard at this internship. On the other hand, I have also gone to an excellent school.
正确例句：
On the one hand, ice cream is delicious. On the other hand, it is very fattening.
On the one hand, this is my dream school. On the other hand, it is very expensive and far from home.
5. It gives me a good mood 给我一个好心情！
他们说完心情好了，但是主考官心情可能将不能好。
easier的说法是：
It puts me in a good mood /in a good state of mind.
It soothes my mind.
It makes my day.
6. Doing sports can improve my physical ability.
做运动能提升我的身体素质/体能
他们经常查完字典，自信满满的讲出了physical ability，知道真相后泪流满面。
正确的打开方式是：
It can improve my health and willpower. (health已经精确easier了抒发了身体素质那个含义)
It generally improves my overall quality of life and fitness level
7. It adds joys to my life 它给我的生活增添乐趣
正确的打开方式是：
It adds spice to my life （表示丰富生活）
It always brightens/makes my day/week. 划重点：make one‘s day 让某人的一天开心
Listening to a variety of music spices up my life. 划重点：spice up 给…增添趣味
It breaks up the monotony/daily grind. 划重点：daily grind 日常琐事
8. Visual pleasure / auditory pleasure / taste enjoyment
视觉享受/听觉享受/味觉享受，是不能直译的。
正确的打开方式是：
…is pleasing to my ears/eyes.
…is visually pleasing / aesthetically pleasing.
It tastes amazing!
9. Arouse my echo 引起我的共鸣，但是无法引起主考官的共鸣！
法式抒发：
This TV program aroused people’s echoes.
His speech gave me some echoes.
注：引起共鸣是不能直译的，需要具体的上下文。
正确的打开方式
Movie:
It is a movie that allows people to reminisce.
It is a reminiscent movie.
I feel I have a strong connection with the plot / story in this movie.
I can relate with this movie’s themes/ plots / characters.
People feel highly connected to / can relate with this movie’s themes/ plots /characters.
Speech:
I strongly agree with most of the ideas presented in his speech.
I couldn’t agree more with his ideas.
I find there are plenty of things that I can relate to in his speech.
His words deeply impressed the audience.
10.Improve my work/study efficiency
提升学习效率 是不能这么说的！
正确的说法：
Making detailed plans allows me to work efficiently.
He is very efficient/ studious on the job.
They spend their time wisely.
They are very organized and proactive.
11. I’m so boring. This class is so bored.
-ed结尾的形容词用于主观描述自己感到…，-ing表示客观令人…的。类似的形容词还有很多。如：excited/exciting，annoyed/annoying，depressed/depressing.
正确用法：
I’m so bored. I feel so bored.
This class is so boring.
12. Besides 另外
常用于两个递进的观点之间，广泛用于书面语和写作之中。但是你一定不知道在第二语言者看来，besides 后面的观点常常是不重要的，不充分的理由。因此抒发递进观点时，用 As well / In addition / Also 这样的连词更精确。
正确例句：
I know I shouldn’t have bought a new phone, but I really liked this one. Besides,it was 5% off. （5%的打折并不是买那个手机得决定性因素）
I worked at a great company that trained me well. As well / In addition / Also, I was the leader of a successful team. (后者：我是很强的领导者是重要的观点)
13. Have a try 试试？
那个是chinglish 的代表了，能认知含义，但是感觉怪怪的。抒发尝试他们能用：give it a try / try my hand at it / try it/ give it a shot
Although painting is not right up my alley, I would like to give it a try / try my hand at it / try it/ give it a shot.
14. Have a rest
这是一个大家都说，但是不正确的抒发。Rest 常用于时间较久/卧床的休息。
抒发短暂的休息，他们能说take a break / relax / unwind / have a breather / recharge my batteries.
On the weekend, I often stay at home to take a break / relax / unwind/have a breather/recharge my batteries
划重点：on the weekend （美式英文）/ at the weekend （英式英文）
15. I must walk more. 我必须要多走路啦！
不要再用must啦！在这里他们用 have to/should 抒发主观意愿更合适。其实must在英文抒发，特别是书面语中，语气太强，用的频率很少。
正确例句：
I should walk more to stay in good shape.
I have to finish my project tonight to meet the deadline.
People should/ ought to help the community to keep it in good condition/clean.
16. on the opposite (side)of my home 在我家对面？
正确的抒发方式是：
…is across the street from…
There is a convenience store just across the street from my home.
The convenience store is across the street.
17. Delicious
其实delicious 的使用频率在第二语言者中很低。
正确的抒发方式是：
It tastes so good/ awesome / amazingly good!
This is tasty /yummy/ delectable / scrumptious / addictive.
18. I’m so hot.
这样抒发我很热，会引起歧义，感觉在说：我很辣！/有魅力！在夏天，他们能这样说：
It’s very hot.
I feel so hot.
I’m melting / overheating / roasting / baking out here.
19. I think we can’t make this trip.
我觉得他们去不了这次旅行了
根据语法惯例, think, suppose, believe, imagine, guess 等后的宾语从句如果是否定句,要把否定转移到主句的think等动词上,这叫做“否定前移”或“否定前置。
因此他们应该这样说：
I don’t think we can make this trip
20. Chinese is my mother language. 中文是我的第二语言。
第二语言不能直译
他们能说：
First language / mother tongue / native language.
以上托福书面语中20个低频法式抒发，你记下了么？先收藏吧，一定用得着
